Earth’s Damp Mound
for P.M.
I. February 1998.
That week it rained white petals
and loss completed its
turn, the words finding themselves
alone, without measure,
without force, and no body to compare.
Though strangers spoke I could not.
Is this destiny, an unopened
mouth filled with
pebbles, a pear tree
deflowered by the wind? The earth’s
damp mound settles among your bones.
II. Count the Almonds
What bitterness
preserves your sleep,
reflects the eye’s
task along the inward thread?
Not the unspoken, but the unsayable.
Curious path, curious seed.
A shadow separates
to join another, and in the darker
frame carries the uncertain
further, past silence, past touch,
leaving its hunger alert and unfed,
allowing us our own protections.
III. The Bowl of Flowering Shadows
Reconciled, and of particular
grace, they lean, placing emphasis on balance,
on layer and focus, on depth of angle
absorbing the elegant darkness,
a lip, an upturned glance, the mirror.
What light caresses, it may destroy.
Even the frailest may alter intent.
So which, of all those you might recall,
if your matter could reform
and place you back into yourself,
would you choose? Forgive me
my selfishness, but I must know.
IV. Requiem
Then, you said, the art of nothingness
requires nothing more
than your greatest effort.
And how, seeing yours, could we,
the remaining, reclaim our
space without encroaching on what
you’ve left? One eye closes, then
the other. One mouth moves and another
speaks. One hears, one listens, the eternal
continuation. Rest, my friend. After.
Prentiss Moore influenced my reading and writing more than he ever realized. We spent many hours talking, eating, arguing, drinking, laughing. Always laughing – he had one of those all-encompassing laughs that invited the world to join in. And it frequently did. Through Prentiss I met in person one of my literary heroes, Gustaf Sobin, whose work Prentiss had of course introduced me to. Those few hours spent with the two of them driving around in my pickup truck, discussing poetry, the Texas landscape, horticulture and the vagaries of the publishing world, are hours I’ll always hold close.
Earth’s Damp Mound first appeared in the anthology Terra Firma.
quite the masterpiece, Sir Robert. I would rate this one of a kind. Unlike any other.
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Thanks very much.
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‘The art of nothingness requires nothing more than your greatest effort’. That is my favorite line in this absolutely striking poem. I loved it!
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Thank you. I’m so pleased the poem, and this line, speaks to you.
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I also loved that part, incredibly striking
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I’m pleased you like it. Thanks.
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My favorite line as well. Very nice.
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This is gratifying to hear. Thank you.
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To write one such poem in a lifetime would be blessing without measure. Thank you for sharing a little of the magic!
Warmest,
Ron
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Thank you, Ron. As always, your kindness is greatly appreciated.
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You must have loved this man very much to write such a heartfelt poem. thank you for sharing it.
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A unique individual, he was much loved among my contemporaries. I’m still reading books and authors he recommended decades ago!
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Exquisitely beautiful–I am hushed.
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Thank you.
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Thanks for the like! I checked out your page – superb!
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You’re welcome, and thanks for stopping by.
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Very beautiful,Robert; subtlety, mystery, very moving–you write from a deep place.
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I seldom know what I’m going to write when I sit at the desk. This one had been building up a while.
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Loss is very difficult, but in these lines you add a superior feeling to our lives that shapes it into the meaning that makes a difference. Lovely poem, Robert:
Is this destiny, an unopened
mouth filled with
pebbles, a pear tree
deflowered by the wind?
That “a pear tree / deflowered by the wind” made me think of Whitman’s elegy to Lincoln – When Lilacs Last in the Dooryard Bloom’d where in stanza three he tells us “A sprig with its flower I break”:
In the dooryard fronting an old farm-house near the white-wash’d palings,
Stands the lilac-bush tall-growing with heart-shaped leaves of rich green,
With many a pointed blossom rising delicate, with the perfume strong I love,
With every leaf a miracle—and from this bush in the dooryard,
With delicate-color’d blossoms and heart-shaped leaves of rich green,
A sprig with its flower I break.
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Thanks, Steven. Both are acts of departure, I think.
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Loss is very difficult, but in these lines you add a superior feeling to our lives that shapes it into the meaning that makes a difference. Lovely poem, Robert
Is this destiny, an unopened
mouth filled with
pebbles, a pear tree
deflowered by the wind?
That “a pear tree / deflowered by the wind” made me think of Whitman’s elegy to Lincoln – When Lilacs Last in the Dooryard Bloom’d where in stanza three he tells us “A sprig with its flower I break”:
In the dooryard fronting an old farm-house near the white-wash’d palings,
Stands the lilac-bush tall-growing with heart-shaped leaves of rich green,
With many a pointed blossom rising delicate, with the perfume strong I love,
With every leaf a miracle—and from this bush in the dooryard,
With delicate-color’d blossoms and heart-shaped leaves of rich green,
A sprig with its flower I break.
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Such an elegant elegy. I admire your ability to write poems in distinct parts that complement each other so naturally.
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The parts seem to end themselves, without much direction from me. But thank you.
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I am speechless. I can only feeel it all and I somehow feel I would marr the absolute beauty of your words by commenting in mere words. Thank you for this beauty Robert.
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I’m pleased it speaks to you, Anjali. Thank you.
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This is the best thing I’ve found recently!
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I’m glad you’ve found it. Thanks.
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All of the above, and deservedly. I can add no more.
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Thank you.
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Lovely, lyrical lament.
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Thank you.
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I thought this was exquisite, masterfully and sensitively written, worth many reads
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I appreciate your comments. Thanks very much.
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May I use a little English understatement?
This is rather good.
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I’m rather grateful for your kindness!
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Robert, this is a stunning in memoriam and tribute to Mr. Moore. I can see why it was published/anthologized, as it is brilliant. “Bowl of Flowering Shadows” alone is so striking, I could feast on the plaintive consonance of the “ow,” long and long (as Whitman wrote; yes, I shall quote him, too; it seems very fitting). What a friend and, dare I say it, mentor he must have been. My sincerest condolences, Robert, much after the fact.
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I owe him much. Truth be told, I don’t think I ever thought of him as mentor, though of course he was. We were friends who shared some interests. He read widely, and spoke eloquently and enthusiastically about his reading. I absorbed as much as I could. I think he gave much more than he received.
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Reblogged this on starings and commented:
Dear Robert,
I hope you don’t mind the re-blog? Bas has thoroughly enjoyed following your blog, taking his time reading your poems and recommending me to visit, now I see why.
Best,
Kim
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I’m honored! Thank you.
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This elegy brought me to tears with its grace and elegance. How lovely are these simple words that give small pieces of remembrance and moments. Beautiful.
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Your comments are very generous. Thank you.
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Beautiful, Bob. This poem, then, is the source for the title of your chapbook “If Your Matter Could Reform,” in which it is the final offering. What a momentous, heartbreaking “if.”
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Thanks, Cate. Yes, it is. I wrote it a couple of years after Prentiss died.
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“Reconciled, and of particular
grace, they lean, placing emphasis on balance,
on layer and focus, on depth of angle
absorbing the elegant darkness,
a lip, an upturned glance, the mirror”.
good lord, what a magical spell here
thank you, g.r.
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Thanks very much!
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