I’ve three poems appearing in The Blue Hour Magazine:
http://thebluehourmagazine.com/2014/12/28/3-poems-by-robert-okaji/
The sonnet was written a dozen years after the others, but seemed to mesh with them in some strange way…
I’ve three poems appearing in The Blue Hour Magazine:
http://thebluehourmagazine.com/2014/12/28/3-poems-by-robert-okaji/
The sonnet was written a dozen years after the others, but seemed to mesh with them in some strange way…
I just read all three, wonderful. Congratulations. I particularly liked Laocoon, with its haunting twining imagery. Do you have plans to publish a book? Best, Rachel
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Thanks very much. I was taken with this image:
I’d like to eventually publish a book, but have not yet put together a manuscript that satisfies me. Once that occurs, who knows? Thank you for asking.
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Hmm. The html link didn’t work. Oh, well. The image can be found on Wikipedia under Laocoon.
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Write the book. You’re good!
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Thank you. I hope to have a decent manuscript to present within a year or so, but we’ll see.
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Congratulations to you, Robert–well done!!
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Thank you!
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Nice! Good for you. I hope to see more.
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Thank you. I hope to see more, too. 🙂
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Congrats on the poetry being published. I wish I had a talent for writing poetry– unfortunately mine ends-up usually being nothing more than sarcastic rhymes! I also tend to fall into the same rhyming patterns a lot– maybe I can learn a thing or too from you Robert!
Happy New Year!
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Thank you, David. Poetry is just one word followed by another. Sometimes they work together, sometimes they don’t. 🙂
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I have read and so enjoyed the poems. And I must thank you for introducing me to The Blue Hour Magazine. Take care.
Sally
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Thank you, SS! And thank you for your comment on Blue Hour. It made my day.
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Congratulations on the publication. Good job.
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Thank you, Joseph.
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You should be proud.
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It’s nice to receive a little validation…
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Hey….so good to hear that.
Congratulations!!!
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It’s nice when it happens. Thanks very much.
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Wonderful! I’ve enjoyed reading your work this year. Happy New Year to you! I will see you in 2015…
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Likewise, Laine. Thanks very much.
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Robert, congratulations! Wonderful poems!!!
Happy New and Rich Year!
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Thanks, Andreea. And Happy New Year to you, too.
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Congratulations! 🙂
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Thank you, Lynda.
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Beautiful; I especially like the sonnet, which I have read and re-read (and will read again). Looking forward to appreciating more of your work in 2015, Robert!
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Thank you, Cate (especially for liking the sonnet). Every now and then a sonnet begs to be written, and I am compelled. 🙂
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Thank you so much for your visit and like. God’s blessings to you and Happy new year 🙂
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I have taken that Mandela quote to heart. Thank you.
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Congrats!
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Thanks very much.
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Congrats, Robert! The first two are my favourites. Happy 2015!
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Thank you, Nadine!
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Congratulations Robert!
Bonne année et bonne santé! Léa
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Thank you, Lea. And Happy New Year!
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The words are a treat and I loved the bit of fabric sailing in the air!
Happy new year,
Estela
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Thank you, Estela.
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I thoroughly enjoy your poetry. It’s clever, powerful, emotive…just lovely. I was going to point out lines I enjoyed most in these, but there were too many. Thank you!
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You are very generous, Adrian. Thank you!
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Well done!
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Thank you!
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Love the sonnet particularly.
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Thanks, Ed. There are those occasions when the sonnet form can’t be resisted!
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Congrats Robert! I really enjoyed all three poems, but my favourite was Wind. The final lines
“I cannot feel but I touch,
I cannot feel.”
Still has me thinking…
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Thanks, Andy. Don’t stop thinking! 🙂
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Personifying the wind is an ingenious concept. Regarding the third poem, have you read Camille Paglia’s “Glittering Images”? She has a wonderful chapter on Laocoon. You bring that masterpiece to life in a different way. Thanks, as always, for liking my blog entry.
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I haven’t read the Paglia, but will make a point to. Thanks!
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Congratulations. Lovely poems – all those words describing wind, brilliant.
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Thank you. The wind is everywhere, but in whose bed does it sleep?
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Congratulations, Robert! Wonderful poetry.
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Thank you, Irina. I enjoyed your fibi!
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Congrats Robert
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Thanks very much.
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Eagle Pond Farm
October in New Hampshire means colored leaves for kicking.
Donald kicks a few heading into town for cheese.
He notices that the antique dealer, once again, announced
The coming of winter by changing his sign. It now reads:
“Driveways Plowed, Reasonable Rates.” The type of
De-evolution Donald appreciates.
Standard time ensures contrast, as autumn’s last bonfire
Sends a leaf-shaped spark into the air.
A simple way of life is free to walk around without inspection:
So Donald does. He checks out of Najur’s General Store
With Gouda and N.Y. Sharp Cheddar tucked away.
He climbs up the knoll then down the driveway to the farm.
He kicks a pinecone to the safety of the woods.
He exhales steam that quickly disappears.
He can almost see ice forming on the pond.
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“Kicking the Leaves” is one of my favorite Hall poems! I dunno why, but your comment was kicked into my spam folder.
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Isn’t it fun to write and publish?
best,
G.
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Yes, it is!
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Congrats Robert! I very much appreciated the poems, especially Wind and Laocoon. I’m surprised you don’t have a trade publication yet.
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I’m so pleased you liked them, Shery. If all goes well, I’ll have a chapbook out by June, if not sooner. I will of course announce details when I have them. Thanks very much for your interest and kind comments.
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Wonderful! I self-published a chapbook. I’ve had problems publishing it on wordPress (with Paypal button). You obviously are more experienced and well-versed in writing than I am, so I’m just surprised you don’t have a trade publication out yet. Looking forward to the release of your chapbook!
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I’ve not yet put together a solid book-length manuscript, but one of these days…
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Read your poems, they are quite nice. The ones I understood of course. I am a poetry newbie. Thanks for liking my article.
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Thanks very much, Peter.
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Loved ‘wind’…. Some phrases just transported me to a beautiful place….
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And there’s no charge for baggage! Thank you for your kind comment.
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i got in the blue hour a couple of times, by the way i think your a fine poet
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Thanks very much!
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no problems, your welcome
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And I thought I was a poet! You rock, man! In a complex yet mysteriously understandable way of course.
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Thanks very much! I’m glad you enjoyed them.
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Nice work. I especially liked the wind shudder..
Thanks, Non
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Thanks very much!
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Nice work, especially with the sonnet.
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Thanks, LJ. Sometimes sonnets just write themselves!
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I especially liked ‘Wind’ it seems to echo what I feel about the wind – and we’ve had some of late.
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I’m so pleased you like “Wind.” Our windy season is about to begin.
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thanks for stopping by my blog..I got to read your beautiful work..keep writing
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Thank you. I don’t intend to stop…
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I can’t get through the link..I love the pictures though…I will try to read through some of your poems in this site..
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I’m sorry about the link. It seems to be working now.
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Many congratulations Robert! You’ve got some great work there 🙂
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Thank you, Tracy! It’s good to hear from you.
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Robert, I don’t know how you found me, but I find your poems very appealing. Nice work. For about the last 10 years, until I retired, I had a little saying on the bulletin board in my office: “Nothing is everything. Don’t settle for anything less.”
And the list of publications at the end of the 3 looks like a shotgun approach for my own work. Hmmmm.
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Thanks, Gary. Hey, the shotgun approach can be successful!
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Wonderful… Congratulations… Thanks. for stopping by my blog and liking my work…
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Thank you for writing your work!
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Congratulations!
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Thank you.
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I had it beat into me that poetry must rhyme (that was when they could beat us in school). Such and interesting read. Congratulations on for the recognition. Keep them coming!
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Thank you. I’ll try.
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It’s always a thrill to be recognized and published. Congratulations and keep writing. Also, I love company, so thanks for stopping by my blog.
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Indeed it is! Thank you for stopping by.
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