Hummingbird (2)
It embraces what the mind cannot.
To touch, to be
acquired in the way that light
is drawn to the seed’s
core, one must imagine
silence in the purity of
space – that emptiness between
thought and utterance – filled
with what precedes
intent. The movement
has no end; it is
the breath inhaling us all.
Beautiful!!!
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Totally agree!
“Hummingbird (2)
It embraces what the mind cannot.
To touch, to be”
That first part totally shakespearean 🙂
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Thank you!
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“…filled/ with what precedes intent…” The “what” here is the heart of the mystery of all being.
When my son was seven, he was interested in neurology (I know, that statement sounds outrageous apart from the immediate context that spawned it, and even within that context — lol! Little man has never failed to keep me on my toes…). I had been reading to him and showing him illustrations in textbooks about how nerve impulses arise from thoughts about intent and then propagate to the given anatomical structure required to carry out that intent. But when he observed, “Thoughts cause the electrical impulses that enable movement, but what precedes and enables thoughts? To my knowledge, no one has yet answered that question. It must be something that is pre-conscious, and therefore, impossible to observe/measure… It’s akin to the “what” that makes a hummingbird — its structure, movement, ostensible moments of rest, and seemingly impossible energy configuration, that is light-years beyond our comprehension — a “what” which undeniably IS.
This is how I understood this inspiring poem, anyway. Am I even close?
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Sorry there’s no editing feature for comments. Looks like I left the following thought from above unfinished:
But when he observed, “Thoughts cause the electrical impulses that enable movement, but what precedes and enables thoughts?” I didn’t have an answer. To my knowledge, no one has yet answered that question.
Hope it makes a bit more sense now…
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Yes! You have captured much of what I hope is there. The liminal, the between, the before. I’ve never outgrown the “why?” stage, and this poem is an example of that. 🙂 I have few answers but questions abound!
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Such a beautiful poem and the stained glass is exquisite.
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Thank you. The stained glass is stunning, isn’t it?
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The Tao Te Ching says “rThe Tao that can be spoken is not the eternal Tao” but these words cme hauntingly close. Exquisite.
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We try to put words to the unsayable, with mixed results. But the trying is the key.
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How refreshing 🙂
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Thank you, Crystal.
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that “emptiness between thought and utterance,” has been the undoing of many. this poem is loaded. that space is never empty because, like you rightly infer, that’s where the hummingbird resides. love the symbolism of the hummingbird. nice one, Robert.
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Traveling through that space can be quite difficult. But the attempt is ultimately rewarding.
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i know. brilliant piece.
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Thank you, fellow traveler.
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Gorg-ioso. Love the cleanness, depth and spaciousness of this. So open and soft in it’s inhale. Thank you. 💖
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Thanks very much. The poem is nearly thirty years old, and I’m pleased that the younger ROproduced something that still works.
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Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
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Thank you, Mashook.
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Wonderful poem! i liked it a lot.
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Thank you, Siddharth. Much appreciated.
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you, Merril.
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Fine poem! An animal’s consciousness, awareness, can’t be known to us beyond delight in sunlight and finding food.
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Thank you, Alan.
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