New Year
How transparent you’ve become:
even the leaves blow through
your pockets, and penitents
line up, awaiting the latest word.
Those who have, fear the most.
Each day collapses under its own
weight, rising again into the new.
Surgery brooks no illusions;
this house, too, will fail.
Owning little, I pour tea and wait.
Love this. I think we are all pouring tea and hoping, just hoping. :o)
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Thank you. Yes, I think hope is imperative.
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Happy New Year!!ππ (defo keep hoping…got lots of teabags π)
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Happy New Year! More tea!
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Lovely poem. Happy New Year!
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Thank you, Rachel. Happy New Year to you, too!
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Very nice. Enjoyed the enjambment. HNY
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Thank you, Kitty. Happy New Year to you, too!
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Starting the year with the Tao is a very good approach Robert. Li Po is smiling.
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It is good to have Li Po’s smile hovering around me. π
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Each day collapses under its own weight … yup! Same for each year. Probably for each hour, if one paid close enough attention. Your somber line about surgery stirs me to ponder surgery on levels human and much broader. Coffee at the moment, but tea might be a good hourly watch ritual …
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Today is a coffee day for me, but who knows what tomorrow will bring?
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Happy New Year πΎ
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And to you, too!
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Brilliant as always! Happy New Year!
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Many thanks, Linda. Happy New Year to you, too.
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Happy New Year, Robert. Best wishes for 2017!
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Thank you, Iris. Back at you!
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This is the second poem I’ve read with tea this morning. Ah, hello, new year. Maybe something to sweeten the drink this time round?
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It’s a coffee day for me, but tea is always welcome.
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The question is – loose tea or bagged? Must be loose, if you want to read the leaves and see into the future. Did you find a photo to go with the poem or was the poem inspired by the photo?
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I think loose would be appropriate. As is usual with me, I wrote the poem first and then found a photo to pair with it.
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Happy Grumpmas, Sir Robert. I know all about failing houses, and the patent limitations of hope, but I find myself (despite myself) daring to live in hope’s possibility every now and then…
Right now, I’m watching a live feed of newly hatched eaglets, and I’m reminded of the precious, perfect ugly-beauty which can (must!) be born of cracked houses.
Also, it can’t hurt to fantasize about some choice excisions and cauterizations — and so I will be indulging myself with abandon, as I, too, bide my time.
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Grumpmas has become my favorite holiday. Now that I’m back to the land of the internet, I need to watch that live feed.
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well said.
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Thanks very much, Nancie.
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“How transparent youβve become:
even the leaves blow through” — So true in so many ways. Marvelous poem, Robert. This morning I look out the window into the world and wonder . . . what will this year be like, and me a part of it.
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Let’s hope that what the future holds is not TOO interesting, George. But we must experience it. Such is life.
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Here’s to the failing houses; I’ll watch like you, not by any stretch idle, in this little shelter, keeping what rain I can out of my cup. π
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Cheers, SJ! When moving through rain between house and shack, I provide little tinfoil hats for my cups. Lately I’ve wondered if I need one, too.
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Oh, my dear fellow!
‘How transparent youβve become:
even the leaves blow through
your pockets, and penitents
line up, awaiting the latest word’ –
You can’t imagine how I love your words.
I once wrote like that –
I was a better man in those days –
now I merely explain what I mean …
rather than say what I mean —
I remember the difference.
Oh God, I remember the difference.
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You are very generous.
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Generous? Not at all. Giving you my shirt would be generous – and very odd. Giving you praise is merely your due as an artist.
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Happy New Year, Robert.
I am waiting too. We shall see, and then do what we can. (K)
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That seems to be the plan, Kerfe. And Happy New Year!
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this house, too, will fail.
Owning little, I pour tea and wait. —- What a wonderful line. pregnant with ideas.
happy New year Robert.
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Thanks very much, and Happy New Year to you, too.
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Lovely written poem. There is always hope.
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Thank you, H. Let us welcome hope!
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Such a wonderful address to the New Year. Here is hoping that 2017 will be a good year for you
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Thank you. I don’t know what to expect of the new year except that it will be interesting.
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This made me reflect on the welcome and unwelcome properties of transparency.
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Ah, two sides to everything… At the least.
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Wonderful poem and images.. Like a clear drop of tear. β€
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Thank you. I’m hoping they are tears of joy!
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Joy ; and also delightful , beautiful melancholy/wistfulness… β€
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Very very nice, blog, poem and image!
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Thank you!
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Love that “pockets and penitents” . Actually I like it all. Need to make a cuppa now.π
Happy New Year, Robert!π
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Thank you, Kat. And Happy New Year to you!
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Wow, subtle and powerful all at once, Robert. I’ll pour some tea and wait with you π
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More tea! We may also need more room on the couch…
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*laughs* yes, it does sound like it π
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Pouring tea with hope – and cool bench photo !
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I’ll put on the kettle! The photo is from morguefile.com.
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Ok- you are so hospitable
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Happy new year
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And to you!
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π
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Nice poem! Happiness to you Robert.
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Thanks, Peter. Much peace and happiness to you, too.
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Reblogged this on TJ Writes, Etc. and commented:
Sometimes … tea … is all you can do.
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Thanks for reblogging, TJ. Tea, with a bit of coffee. The occasional scone helps, too. π
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YW. π
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To all the good people on this page, Happy New Year!
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I’ll leave the kettle on. Happy New Year, Charmaine.
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One of my fav here.
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Thanks, D. The tea is steeping.
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Ah that ending!!
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Thank you!
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HI Robert, your poem is beautiful! Every day I pour my morning cup of coffee and look for my hope! Maybe I should switch to tea :). Thank you for stopping by my blog and taking a look! Happy New Year!
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My days begin with coffee, too, but tea appears, especially on cold days, here and there. Thanks for your kind comment and for stopping by.
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This made me smile, transparent as I have become. I need to read more of your poetry.
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Thanks very much, Thomas!
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Another lovely poem, Robert! Happy New Year to you!
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Thank you, Dianne!
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Drinking Tea can be very reflective
lovely poem
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Thank you. Our daily rituals can somehow take on extra meaning.
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even the leaves blow through
your pockets, and penitents
line up,
Very very nice
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Thank you. It somehow seemed appropriate to the times and the season.
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Excellent.
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Thanks very much!
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Robert,
This poem speaks to me from your own heart. Thanks for your vulnerability in writing it. And thanks for visiting my blog on a number of occasions. I write as well about spirituality and contemplation, as well as try my hand at poetry. Please feel free to pass on my blog address to others who you think might resonate with the work.
Blessings,
Bob
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Thank you, Bob. This is why we write, is it not? To connect with others? I will be certain to visit and pass on your blog address.
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