This is Not Just to Say
Okay. I ate the damned
plums. But it’s not my
fault you left them
sitting there on the top
shelf, so sweet, so cold,
enticing me, as only
you, or perhaps a ripe
peach, or strawberries,
or Asian pears or even
pomegranates, can do.
Besides, you need
something substantial
for breakfast. How about
donuts, or bacon, instead?
* * *
My apologies to WCW, but I couldn’t resist. You can find the original Williams poem here. The poem first appeared here in September 2015.
I had tried doing a take on this poem, too. It kind of begs for one, doesn’t it? 🙂
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It does, indeed! How could we resist?
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😉
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Williams is one of my favs (I can’t believe I used that word) . I like your version. You know how to blame the offended and suck up!
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Thanks, Leo. Yes, blaming and sucking up seem to be hallmarks of this poem. 🙂
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Probably I should eat breakfast before my morning online reads … I am left now with a strong appetite for plums AND bacon … neither in the house … !!
But I am smiling – like your twist here.
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I can understand not having plums, but bacon is always in season! 😄
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I never did like the original as much as everyone else seemed to think everyone should. Yours I love.
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Thanks, Ellen. The original is just too fun to resist messing up!
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I am sorry.
I ate all the Little Debbies
from the box
all six
honey buns.
They were sweet
and so delectable
dipped into my coffee.
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Ha. Love this!
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Great take Robert. WCW would be proud.
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Thank you, Davy.
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Williams is a favorite of mine – love your response to his poem. I am off to find some bacon…
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I hope your bacon is nearby!
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I liked the original. So playful. Demonstrates a different side of you.
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Thanks, V.J. The playful side sneaks out on occasion. 😬
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Good thing, too!
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Bob, both original Williams’ poem and yours are delicious. Enjoyed them. I would have eaten the plums too . Don’t eat bacons and prefer natural sweetness to the sugars in donuts.
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It’s hard not to eat the plums! And I have to agree on the donuts – I seldom eat them these days, as they seem too sweet.
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I’m sure no apologies are necessary–bacon, please! (K)
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🥓🥓🥓🥓🥓🥓
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haha I loved this!
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Thanks, Vanessa. Is it time for breakfast?
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You are most welcome! And it is always time for breakfast 🙂 (but technically, not for another 8+hours here)
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My favorite meal, anytime!
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Agreed!! 🙂
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Great fun
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Thanks, Derrick. It was fun to riff on that poem. 🙂
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My wife and I had a discussion yesterday about a cutting remark I had made. I apologized, we bonded and switched the topic. A few minutes later I got up, but before I left I said, “I forgive you.” She began to pound on my back (playfully), and I said, “So this is how domestic violence starts.”
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But had you eaten the plums?
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Who can resist plums? William of all people will surely understand.
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Well I ate 2 after emailing you a pic. I assume you didn’t mean Women Crush Wednesday 😂
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Ha!
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Bold and cheeky, but, surely Williams himself would smirk at your nerve, Robert. I love it.
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Thanks, Simon.
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