No One Knows
There, the dream of flying
cars, and the next,
tumbling through soft
glass, inconsiderate and
hopeful as a child
on his birthday,
hands outstretched, waiting.
Unsmiling. You might ask
where this story turns,
whether the glass reconstitutes
or the car crashes,
reminders of a childhood
reconsidered and the simplest
truth, which is no one knows.
“No One Knows” was first published in The Pangolin Review in March 2018.
Great piece of writing.
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Thank you very much.
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Tumbling through soft glass? This is a dream I’m perhaps overdue …
Outstretched hands, waiting, unsmiling stirs up multiple recalls. And in most of them, indeed, no one knows exactly what’s happening (though everyone has their disparate opinions!).
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Oh, those opinions!
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Much to think about here. Life unfolds, each moment explaining/confusing the previous/next. Even as children, are we just along for the ride, or do we determine our direction?
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I think I’m hitching a long ride…
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Dreamily, poignantly, thought-provoking
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Thank you, Derrick
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Aah yessss, wonderful! When coming back to start reading blogs again, yours was one of the ones I was looking forward to the most! ❤
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You are always so kind! Thank you.
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Well-executed. Must agree whole-eyedly with Arbie (comment above) – I do so enjoy juxtapositions and you craft them so well. Even when pressed – hard or hardly – my hands take keyboard and insist we stop for a breath by O at the Edges.
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Thank you, sir. You do me great honor.
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“reminders of a childhood
reconsidered and the simplest
truth, which is no one knows.”
that is a finish with a flourish…so fine1
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Thank you, Sarah!
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My toy cars always crashed, and I can’t ever remember falling and finding the glass soft, and for that matter, no one knows, because I can’t remember.
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I was always crashing my toy cars! It seemed mandatory, back then.
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Wonderfully composed ✨👌
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Thanks very much.
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