Every Drop
Your light singes my roots
even deep underground, where
worms revel in your joy
and all the days’ secrets line up
awaiting their turn to kneel and
unwrap their daily truths in the
comfort of the chambered soil.
If I were a seed, I would wait
for your touch before sprouting,
and only then would I surge
to the surface, swallowing
your gift. Greedy but grateful,
I’d open, drink every drop.
Absolutely beautiful! My favorite part:
“If I were a seed, I would wait
for your touch before sprouting”
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Thank you, Marta!
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You are welcome, Robert.
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My favorite part, too. 🙂
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So glad you like it, Merril. Thank you.
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Simply beautiful, Bob!
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Thank you, Lynne!
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For one so blessed as to taste such sustenance, there is no greed but that which is gratitude.
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They may indeed be one and the same!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you, Leslie!
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I love the imagery in this piece. Just lovely!
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Thank you, Celaine!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Kendra!
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Damn that was good.
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Thanks, JRB! Much appreciated.
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Gorgeously written
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Thank you, Candice.
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Written so well
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Thanks very much!
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Beautiful movement
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Thank you.
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This is so beautiful, it’s not funny. I feel like my poems are immature.
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Thanks very much. Keep writing!
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Thanks
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A little earth, a little water, a little light….all we need, really. (K)
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It seems enough most of the time!
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Above all others, I look for your poems. You language is rich and fresh and causes me to blink, reread, and read again. Thank you!
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Thank you, Barbara. That is all I could ever hope for in a reader!
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