I somehow missed that my poems “Earth Keeps Spinning” and “Awaiting Thunder, He Dreams” were published by Red River Review in August 2018. Thank you, Michelle Hartman, for taking these.
I somehow missed that my poems “Earth Keeps Spinning” and “Awaiting Thunder, He Dreams” were published by Red River Review in August 2018. Thank you, Michelle Hartman, for taking these.
Congratulations, Bob.
They are a fine matching pair. I could imagine “Awaiting Thunder, He Dreams” as a prologue to “Earth Keeps Spinning.”
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Thanks, Ken. I believe they came from the same impulse.
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Wonderful poems, Robert. The last line of “Awaiting Thunder” lingers.
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Thank you, Merril. I’m glad that line resonates!
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Both are excellent (as usual), Bob. I’d be hard-pressed to choose my favorite of the two, but “Awaiting Thunder, He Dreams” really shook me with how it can be so relatable to our country today, particularly this line: “When we give nothing we have nothing.” (Sidewise with that thought is that if we give hate, that’s pretty much all we have.) Last, I love that your poetry/this poem can be so very subtly political and lyrical, as well as philosophical and metaphysical, at the same time.
In “Earth Keeps Spinning,” I was struck by the diction, particularly “inkling” early on in the poem. Because you’d primed my mind for books and publishing themes, I read “inking” at first; again, I am captivated by how your work constantly surprises and defies any expectations–subconscious or otherwise–the reader might have.
So, bravo, once again, Bob!
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Thanks, as always, Leigh. Politics seems to creep in everywhere these days. Though they have different origins, at least in their genesis, both poems are born of the same impulse.
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And a deserved Pushcart nomination comes in, I see. Woo-hoo! We still have time to make 2018 something positive, as in the Year of the Poet (Robert Okaji)! Many congratulations.
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I don’t know how deserved it is, but I’ll take it! 🙂 It’s always such a surprise!
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The world is full of ghosts.
More congratulations! (K)
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It is indeed, Kerfe. Thank you.
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