Listening to Cicadas, I See Charlottesville (Ghazal)
Shedding one coat, you live in the red, apart
from the rest. Never together, forever apart.
In this sun-drenched field, the cracks drill deeper,
wider, dribbling soil and small lives, expanding, apart.
What falls truer than any words released from this man?
Once divided, never again to touch, always apart.
The electric shrill fluctuates pitch, in unison. Hundreds
of tymbals, shredding dusk, now together, then apart.
You narrow your eye to a slit, but still see the entire
spectrum. Wing clicks, stridulation. Whole yet apart.
Shearing syllables, I learn the language of half-truth.
What is my name? I reach for that fragment. It falls apart.
“The electric shrill”… what a perfect way to describe the cacophony of hissing that is the sound of cicadas. It really has an ‘electricity to it. I have described the sound as a basic hiss for years, but could never really capture the feeling of it. It also has a kind of fluctuating quality to it that is almost hypnotic. Maybe it is just me, but the cicade shrill puts me into a kind of blissful hypnosis (at the right volume). It has such a strong connection to blissfully hot days in Japan, lying half asleep/drunk in the summer shade… those damn bugs electrically shrilling… total Paradise!
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Their hum seems almost electronic or mechanical. And when they all go quiet simultaneously, well, the momentary silence is stunning. Or invigorating.
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yeah, that almost “thunderous” post-cicada silence! You really notice and accurately describe things. I guess that is why you are a master poet and I am just a word writing guy…
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Ha! Just a word writing guy. You are anything but that!
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Interesting twist on the form, that last line. Well done.
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Thanks, Devon. Sometimes I wonder who I am…
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You are very welcome. D
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I have a fondness for cicadas.
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My cicada relationship is a bit of the love/hate variety. I think more fondly of them in winter. 🙂
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When I was a child I loved finding their castoffs, but even better was finding a newly emerged cicada.
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Ooh, yeah! I still like that.
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Do I hear the shrill sound bites pushing us apart?
Well done.
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You might be hearing that!
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Glad to know that I am still sane.
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Very effective reading … the apart-ness come through … hauntingly.
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Thank you. I was feeling rather “apart” at that time.
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