In Praise of Gravity
Which bestows weight
or slings me around
some other heavenly
body, a version of you
wondering whether
I’ll rise from my next
plummet, victim of
curvature and infinite
range held in place,
attractive in nature,
bent perhaps and
scarred, proud to have
survived but never wiser.
Cleansed, we continue
our orbit, our mirrored fall.
Love this.
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Thank you. It was fun to write.
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Wow – love that closing phrase.
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Thanks very much.
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Love it!
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Thanks!
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Yes!!! I love how you’ve interpreted it in human terms. For what it’s worth, to me this is gold. Really.
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Thank you, M. Your opinion is gold to me! As it turned out the first line I mentioned having written didn’t make the cut.
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Absolutely brilliant!
I never “fall”.
I surrender to gravity.
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Thanks, Oscar. I’m still feeling the effects of my latest “surrender.” 🙂
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very nice!
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Thank you.
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Science is good…never better than when it is cast in outstanding poetry by a friend! But where can I go to see that sculpture of you? *g*
Great stuff, Bob!
Ron
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Too late to see the sculpture, Ron. It was crafted of green cheese, which was subsequently transformed into a magnificent roasted poblano mac and cheese and sent into orbit. Or something like that.
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Oh, what a disappointment! But…was it made of green cheese? I thought it was the Moon that was made of green cheese. *g* No need to reply. I’ll look it up on Google. At any rate, the poem is exquisite…one of your top five in my opinion!
Ron
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Everything is on Google, as you know. But this is classified, of course. Need to know, and all that. But it wasn’t Limburger…
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Love it, full of awe and wistfulness. Also loving the style you wrote it in.
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The word is terribly overused these days, but “awesome” is an appropriate descriptor of gravity. And thanks for your kind words.
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Mind-expanding to contemplate our place and movement in space, yet poignant with human frailty. I like this very much, Robert.
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Thank you. Our place, or presence, is rather mind-boggling, isn’t it?
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Love it all, but especially the final 3 lines
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Thank you.
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Love this.
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Thanks very much.
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poetic and profound!!
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Thanks!
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Deep.
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Thank you, Nazir.
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Beautiful. Your poetry captures gravity.
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Captures, then releases… 🙂
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“Gravity”…the hidden force driving our existence in this world. Great words to embrace and appreciate the power of gravity…Love it.
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Another force we can’t see but which guides our actions. Thanks again for your kind words.
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I read mlewisredford’s post today before yours. There’s a curious synergy between the two. Interesting.
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That seems to happen quite often!
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It doesn’t sound that unpleasant, being a victim of infinite range… perhaps this is why rising proud but none the wise resonates so much 🙂
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Better range than rage!
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Beautiful! It is a tough call to make, but this is my favourite of all your poems I have read so far. Reminded me of the sense of wonder I felt watching a documentary (the name escapes me) on quantum physics that has great visuals to get the message across. Inspiration from the unseen natural world!
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Thank you. The unseen world is much more interesting than, well, my life, and a far better source of inspiration. 🙂
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Was brought here to this post by Ms. Hoffman via Mr. Redford and what do I find?
This brilliant homage to the force I still, long after the naming of my blog, find myself reckoning with.
Or is it in reckoning,
I find myself.
Or still,
I find myself finding myself.
Thanks for putting be back in orbit where I belong and apologies for the over-sight of not having followed you sooner.
See ya’ ’round….
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I’m so pleased you found your way here! Thanks for your kind words.
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I get the feeling that the “falling” is from broken hearts – from which we never learn and continue on and on and on – just waiting for the next. Or have I misread it? No body else seems to have made that connection…. Perhaps I am simply too love struck and so find it everywhere….
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The poem is, of course, deliberately ambiguous, and is about relationships…
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Brilliant. Just brilliant. Thank you for sharing! Many thanks as well for visiting my new blog, I’m honoured & delighted. Peace, j
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You’re very kind, Julia. Thank you. I enjoy your photography.
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Now it’s you who are kind ☺ peace & gratitude, j
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Reblogged this on Paradoxal Perspectives.
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Thanks for reblogging!
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Enjoy everything you have done. Getting to the others, read this first as space is so far out. 🙂
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I’m so pleased you like it. Thank you.
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Wonderful!
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Thanks!
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Omg. I love this entry of yours! So inspiring
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Thank you!
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“scarred, proud to have
survived but never wiser.”
Sad, beautiful and wise poem.
Andreea
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Thanks very much, Andreea.
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Reblogged this on Vox Populi.
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Thanks for reblogging this, Michael.
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Ah, this one truly resonates with me. The irony, the beauty, the tragedy that really isn’t tragedy if you willingly succumb to it and value what’s found in its depths. There’s an unsettling balance here, and it is quite lovely. Love this on every level of interpretation
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The relationships between what we control and those things entirely out of our reach is rather unsettling, isn’t it? Thank you for your kind words.
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Incredible. I love it.
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You are too kind, as always.
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Well written, especially since we all surrender to gravity whether we want to or not. But sometimes, that surrender makes us fall so hard, we start flying instead 🙂
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I have yet to soar. Mostly after surrendering to gravity I just lie there and moan (with a few curses thrown in).
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