Earth
Tremor and
stone
beset upon the calm.
Now water
lines the road’s
bed, and we see
no means to pass.
Even so
you break what falls.
This first appeared in Ijagun Poetry Journal in December 2013, and is also included in my micro-chapbook, You Break What Falls, available (free of charge) for download from the Origami Poems Project: http://www.origamipoems.com/poets/236-robert-okaji
Simply stated, yet stark imagery – beautiful.
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Thank you, VJ. Much appreciated.
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🙂
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Thanks, Hugh.
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quality over quantity. reading your poetry always reminds me of very basic things that i may have or have not forgotten. it’s always a fresh change of air. speaking of which, i haven’t commented on your posts for a while ah. this was a relaxing, brief but meaningful read.
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Thanks very much, Romeo. I’m glad you felt like commenting!
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I feel the same. Well expressed, Romeo.
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Thank you, Jan.
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You play with the mind of others while you work on your thoughts.
You can let others see clearly the reflection of your image in your words.
I so love that! MUCH! 🙂
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Thank you, Sherrie. And I love your new photo, especially the ‘stache. 🙂
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hehehe … Everyone asked what did I do with my photo. LOL hehehe … I said I want to grow a moustache. It didn’t work. Had to paste one! hahaha …
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Much fun.
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Very beautiful.
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Thanks very much.
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Deceptively simple. I love this. Xx
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Thank you, Kerry.
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I love that there are as many ways to look at the conclusive lines here–“Even so/
you break what falls” (great enjambment, as always)–as there are of looking at a blackbird. And maybe more than a mere 13. The fourth stanza, vowel-laden in its music, is also a favorite. Lovely short poem, Bob; I’ll have to be sure to get my freebie with it included.
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You’ll find that this version is slightly different from the one you download – the words are the same and in the same sequence, but I revised a line break or two. Just couldn’t resist tinkering with it. 🙂
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Thanks for your like! I like yours as well! 🙂
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Thank you, Thia.
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Your welcome, Robert:-)
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