Poem Up at The Elevation Review Posted on November 13, 2020 by robert okaji My poem “In That Pause” is live at The Elevation Review. Thank you, Thomas Kneeland, for taking this piece. Share this:TwitterFacebookTumblrPinterestLike this:Like Loading... Related
A pause of a poem that gives me pause … envisioning “a wave pausing in mid- curl” … you’ve curled a LOT into these few lines. Superb. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply ↓
“You leave, and the oxygen follows.” Oh my, what a great start to this beautiful piece, Robert. So happy for your acceptance of this piece, it’s lovely! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply ↓
Thanks, Susi. I was inspired. And as always, I’m grateful that someone saw fit to publish one of my poems. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply ↓
You’re welcome. I can hear the longing in this piece. Just beautiful! I’m happy that they felt it needed to be shared. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply ↓
I love this! – the oxygen follows!
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Sometimes it leads, too, and I follow. 🙂
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A pause of a poem that gives me pause … envisioning “a wave pausing in mid-
curl” … you’ve curled a LOT into these few lines. Superb.
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2020 has been a midcurl year if ever there was one!
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“You leave, and the oxygen follows.” Oh my, what a great start to this beautiful piece, Robert. So happy for your acceptance of this piece, it’s lovely!
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Thanks, Susi. I was inspired. And as always, I’m grateful that someone saw fit to publish one of my poems.
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You’re welcome. I can hear the longing in this piece. Just beautiful! I’m happy that they felt it needed to be shared. 🙂
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