And to Sleep
and what we
sense if not
of our selves
or within this
space we contain
may be of
no thing touched
by one’s fluttering
eye as if
awake we see
even less the
dreams of course
real though we
hold them only
in our sleep
Another poem from the 80s. “And to Sleep” first appeared here in February 2015.
Lathe of Heaven inspired?
LikeLiked by 1 person
No, but that’s an interesting thought!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lucid dreaming is a definite interest and Le Gunn’s novel takes it to a new level.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It’s been over 40 years since I read the novel. I’ll have to pick up a copy!
LikeLiked by 1 person
It’s still holds well. Enjoy!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I need to reread her work. It’s been so long. Too long.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A good read for having just gotten up … now wondering WHAT I was just dreaming … !!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I seldom remember dreams, but sometimes they’re so vivid they make me question reality…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sometimes when i woke up i want to go back to sleep to get back to my dream that i cant remember what it is
LikeLiked by 1 person
That sounds so familiar to me!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I see future echoes of your writing, but largely, this one seems more imagistic to my mind. The diction is shorter, punchier (very few heavier or more technical Latinate/Greek words here, to my mind, in comparison with your 2000s-2010s work) and the line-break philosophy seems to be different. In short, this is good, but how nicely your work has matured, Bob!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I was still searching for my voice back then, and even when the voice I wanted made its occasional appearance, I had a hard time duplicating it. But I aged, and hopefully, matured.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think dreams can be very powerful, especially for creative endeavors. Loved this one, Bob!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, D. I’m so pleased it resonates for you.
LikeLike