In the Garden of Wind’s Delight
Faltering, it drifts
to a stop, rests for a moment
before fluttering to its end.
It is good to be sound.
It is good to trickle through holes.
It is good to be old
even if just one of a crowd.
These notes serve no purpose
yet they linger beyond
their existence.
I listen to their past
for their future. Where are you?
I ask. What is your true name?
“In the Garden of WInd’s Delight” appeared in July 2019 in Nine Muses Poetry. Thank you, Annest Gwilym, for taking this piece.
Interesting to consider multiple notes as “crowd” …
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It is, indeed. I was feeling a tad vaporous and unseen when I wrote this. 🙂
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Just beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.
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I’m so pleased it resonates for you. Thanks very much!
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On one level, Robert, this is an instruction manual for reading poetry. People get baffled sometimes because they can’t find the “meaning.” But a poem is like your garden – drifting notes, bits of beauty without purpose. You don’t have to know what it “means,” you don’t have to know the “true name” of things, to appreciate the beauty of the garden 😊
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Thanks, Gary. We are of a like mind. I never look for “meaning” in poetry. If a poem makes me feel, or resonates in some way, that’s enough for me.
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Also, humorous tangent on your line, “It is good to be old.” I recall an old cajun saying, “If I’d a known getting old was this much fun, I’d a done it a long time ago.” Having hitchhiked 14 countries since turning age 60, I know what he means. Go ahead. You and Vecchio can envy me now 🙂
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Ha! I understand the sentiment. My life’s circumstances have changed incredibly since I turned 60. The body aches more, but my spirit has expanded.
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When it comes to poem, you are at best with this.
As always brilliant.
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Thank you, Sherrie! I hope you’re doing well.
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I am well, thank you.
In times like this we are all under some circumstances because of this Covid situation.
So, I am drowning myself in between in books.
I prefer it that way. 🙂
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Books have always been my solace!
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