Nine Ways of Shaping the Moon [#FullMoonSocial2014]


Written in response to Jeff Schwaner’s invitation to this evening’s Full Moon Social Party. I’m kicking off the festivities by pairing the poem with a glass of chilly Jaume Serra Cava, accompanied by a tad of Cypress Grove’s Humboldt Fog soft-ripening goat cheese on a slice of crusty baguette, with a handful of grapes and almonds. Cheers!

Nine Ways of Shaping the Moon
– for Lissa

Tilt your head and laugh
until the night bends
and I see only you.

Weave the wind into song.
Rub its fabric over your skin.
For whom does it speak?

Remove all stars and streetlights.
Remove thought, remove voice.
Remove me. But do not remove yourself.

Tear the clouds into threads
and place them in layered circles.
Then breathe slowly into my ear.

Drink deeply. Raise your eyes to the brightness
above the cedars. Observe their motion
through the empty glass. Repeat.

Talk music to me. Talk conspiracies
and food and dogs and rain. Do this
under the wild night sky.

Harvest red pollen from the trees.
Cast it about the room
and look through the haze.

From the bed, gaze into the mirror.
The reflection you see is the darkness
absorbing your glow.

Fold the light around us, and listen.
You are the moon in whose waters
I would gladly drown.


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57 thoughts on “Nine Ways of Shaping the Moon [#FullMoonSocial2014]

  1. I like this a lot. Especially verse 3..It reminds me to let myself just breathe and enjoy nature and to block out the distractions that prevent me from appreciating it more often. Great job again!


  2. Reblogged this on and commented:
    Beautiful poem from O at the Edges (Robert Okaji). Absolutely loved this piece.
    “Talk music to me. Talk conspiracies
    and food and dogs and rain. Do this
    under the wild night sky.”


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