Unwinding

Relaxing in a chair


Unwinding

As in a day’s long
thread

or with cold drink
in hand,

glass sweating,
ice

shrinking, a little
sweet,

some salt, her
smile saying

relax, put up
your feet,

I’ll take care
of this,

don’t worry,
tomorrow’s

a full moon
away.

fmoon

21 thoughts on “Unwinding

  1. My version of this poem would be titled something like, Unraveling, or maybe, Disintegrating… So I will just bask a moment in the serenity of your version, and breathe… ❤
    I kinda dig the accompanying photo of art imitating life, too! That must’ve been a gratifying find. 😃

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  2. Pingback: Unwinding 鬆 by Robert Okaji 丘明 (translation) | Life is But This 命

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