How to Write a Poem
Learn to curse in three languages. When midday
yawns stack high and your eyelids flutter, fire up
the chain saw; there’s always something to dismember.
Make it new. Fear no bridges. Accelerate through
curves, and look twice before leaping over fires,
much less into them. Read bones, read leaves, read
the dust on shelves and commit to memory a thousand
discarded lines. Next, torch them. Take more than you
need, buy books, scratch notes in the dirt and watch
them scatter down nameless alleys at the evening’s first
gusts. Gather words and courtesies. Guard them carefully.
Play with others, observe birds, insects and neighbors,
but covet your minutes alone and handle with bare hands
only those snakes you know. Mourn the kindling you create
and toast each new moon as if it might be the last one
to tug your personal tides. When driving, sing with the radio.
Always. Turn around instead of right. Deny ambition.
Remember the freckles on your first love’s left breast.
There are no one-way streets. Appreciate the fragrance
of fresh dog shit while scraping it from the boot’s sole.
Steal, don’t borrow. Murder your darlings and don’t get
caught. Know nothing, but know it well. Speak softly
and thank the grocery store clerk for wishing you
a nice day even if she didn’t mean it. Then mow the grass,
grill vegetables, eat, laugh, wash dishes, talk, bathe,
kiss loved ones, sleep, dream, wake. Do it all again.
“How to Write a Poem,” is included in Indra’s Net: An International Anthology of Poetry in Aid of The Book Bus, and has appeared on the blog as well.
All profits from this anthology published by Bennison Books will go to The Book Bus, a charity which aims to improve child literacy rates in Africa, Asia and South America by providing children with books and the inspiration to read them.
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Reblogged this on All About Writing and more.
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Thanks for reblogging, Henrietta!
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You are welcome!
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swwwwweeeet
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Thanks, Bob!
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Excellent!
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Thank you!
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“Turn around instead of right.” Yup – this aligns with the strategic advice from Dewitt Jones, photography guru: “Look at what’s behind you!” Also with my personal experience that retracing steps ALWAYS reveals something missed before … perhaps it wasn’t even there before. Thank you for another keeper.
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I like to turn around when walking, as the view definitely looks different. Funny how that is.
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I love this! Remember it from first time you published it. Hope you don’t mind if I reblog?
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Feel free to reblog. Thank you!
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I am supposing that this poem was meant to be a sort of Poetry 102 to follow upon Billy Collins to Collins’s “Introduction to Poetry,” thus the Collins-y voice. If so, that’s pretty balls-y, and you pulled it off. When I get a chance, I’m going to go through this one with a class. Wonderful, wonderful.
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Well, the Collins poem did come to mind, but I thought to address that question so common to poets: how do you write a poem? If course it’s hard to take oneself seriously when writing such a piece, thus a nod towards BC was mandated. I think the piece is my voice flavored with a tad of Collins. 😀
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your voice with a tad of Collins. I would say that that captures it perfectly. Steal, don’t borrow. Sugar from the castle.
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Perhaps the most ridiculous piece ever written on that topic was Poe’s “The Philosophy of Composition,” in part about writing “The Raven.” Such total bs about how he planned it ALL. It is a very great offense to the kami (or Muses, as you prefer) to take credit for the bounty bestowed by them.
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I’ve never read that. Planning a poem down to the last detail would surely kill it!
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And once again you forgot to include Nien Nunb… worst poetic advice ever! LOL! 🙂
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Nien Numb is there! Look!
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“Steal, don’t borrow…” how could I have missed it? Best poem ever!
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Ha! One of these days a Nien Nunb poem will appear on this blog!
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And the truth is this is excellent advice on how to write a poem! It’s brilliant, like everything else you write! 💖
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Now you’re making me blush. Thank you.
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I have a soft spot for these kinds of list-poems and their unique encouragement to look closely at the poetry of life itself. And this one in particular is an excellent example.
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Nice one!
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Thank you!
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No problem
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Resumé
Name: . . .Bobbie Dale . . . Bobby Clean . . . Robert Shepherd. . . Mr. Shepherd. . . ∞
Contact: Yes, please
Address: Lovely spiral galaxy (for a time, but intermittently, partly here, partly elsewhen/elsewhere)
Position sought: None, but, seriously, thank you
Experience:
O yes yes yes!
Skills
Listening, laughter, song, massage, prayer (pardon the redundancy)
Monkey dance
Presentness
Quietness at center
Being the eyes, ears, skin, paws, cirri, antennae, mandibles, notochords, and other
sensory and cognitive extensions/manifestations of the One
Slow disrobing of fruits
Wrapping burritos, sushi, babies (adept)
Languages
Of some trees and birds, various kami, and past/still present laughing masters
Hobbies/interests
Aie yie yie! OmG, of course!
References
Trust your Self on this one!
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We must be related. 😁
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The more I read this poem, Robert, the more I love it. It’s freaking wonderful.
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Thanks, Bob. It was a joy to write.
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I love this one–the truth and the humor.
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Thanks, Merril. I get accused of being too serious sometimes…
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Do you? I don’t know you, but I read humor in some of your poems and comments.
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Yeah, not so much from blog readers, but at workshops or other venues that tend to constrict offerings. Thirty years ago I truly was too serious. But I’ve grown less so with age.
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Yeah, that happens. 😉
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Thank you for reblogging!
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I loved this one the first time and I love it even more now; works for novel writing too! 🙂
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Thanks, SJ. Something about the lived life…
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What a wonderful set of guidelines.. Now if I can only follow them. Thanks.
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Consider them flexible, Darryl. 🙂
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I think you’ve written one the Tao Te Ching’s missing chapters…
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Ha!
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This is awesome! I always wondered how poems were written…even my own. 🙂
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Ha! I still wonder about that…
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Reblogged this on One Woman's Quest II and commented:
Love this poem by Robert Okaji.
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Thanks for reblogging, V.J.
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… and, don’t forget to floss
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Oh, yes. With a chain. 😁
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I laughed out loud at the first line!
I adore this!
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I’m so pleased you like it!
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Love it 🙂
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🙂
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Or we can simply ask you to help us out.
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Ha! That sometimes works.
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nice 👍
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Thanks.
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