Calm (after H.D.)
I flow over the ground,
healing its hidden scar–
the scar is black,
the bedrock risen,
not one stone is misplaced.
I relieve the ground’s
burden with white froth,
I fill and comply—
I have thrown a pebble
into the night,
it returns to me,
settles and rises,
a white dove.
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“Calm” is included in my micro-chapbook Only This, which is available via free download from Origami Poems Project. It made its first appearance here on the blog in March 2015, and was written as an exercise, using a poem, “Storm,” by H.D. as the launching point. I’ve tried to emulate her diction and rhythm, with mixed success. Still, it’s fun to try these on occasion.
A beautiful image
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Thank you, Derrick. H.D. gets all the credit.
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Stunning imagery!
If interested, please drop by to read me piece HERE. I’d love to hear your thoughts. Have a great week!
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Thank you. Your poem is quite nice. The images were well chosen, the language and rhythm, spot on!
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