Requiem II
To say what becomes: this word
bends in the wind of our
breath. Is this too simple to
say? Our bodies gather yet retain
nothing. Numbers, phrases, the way
the ocean rolls. Once I saw
a whale at dusk. Or rather I saw its
tail part the water and disappear
into darkness, an answer too complex
and sweet for tongues to comprehend.
But waves seldom explain. Imagine
something nearby but beyond reach.
Think of clouds and shrines, consider light.
“Requiem II” first appeared here in May 2015.
Gorgeous, Bob. Again, such exquisite rhythm as well as content.
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Thank you, Cate.
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This is brilliant
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Thank you, Maryum. Much appreciated.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Another beauty of a poem. Several hundred stars out of 5!
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If I’d only remembered to insert a Star Wars reference!
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Wait? No reference to Dengar’s ship The Punishing One? Worst. Star Wars. Poem. Ever….
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Ah, the disturbance in The Force has disappeared.
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lovely visuals and emotion from your words. I enjoyed it greatly.
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I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you.
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We are cataloguers of the signified — internal ghosts of essence and experience beyond the body’s confines — while what exists (and what we understand ourselves to perceive on some pre-lingual level) remains wordless. Anyway, Okaji Sensei, you come closer to naming the unnameable than anyone I know.
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I stumble around a lot, and ask questions in my tongue-tied way… It’s all I know to do.
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What great comment! It in itself is poetry!
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Lovely
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Thanks very much, Tricia.
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The whale is a great image
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Seeing one unexpectedly can make its mark!
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Whimsically beautiful!
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I’m pleased you think so. Thank you.
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You’re welcome 😀
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‘To say what becomes …’ You have, in every sense!
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Thank you, Dave.
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Beyond words, yet precisely because of each word you chose and where you placed it and the images provoked, I love this.
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Also, I have re-posted this poem to my FB page 🙂
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🙂
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Thank you, Carrie.
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