I’m still experimenting with recording. Here’s “Scarecrow Remembers,” which was first published atΒ The High Window in December 2016.
O at the Edges
Musings on poetry, language, perception, numbers, food, and anything else that slips through the cracks.
O at the Edges 
great piece! looking forward for more.
Peace β
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Thank you. I’m enjoying playing around with the recordings.
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nice. thanks for sharing.
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Thank you. It was my pleasure.
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I like the crow sounds and the extra gravel in your voice. It sounds more like a radio play than a “poem”… which I think really adds to your words.
19 stars out of 5… with an extra Nien Nunb for effort.
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Any extra gravel is due to post nasal drip. But I like the idea of radio play/poem. The old paradigm is getting stale. I’ve long thought about providing my own “background music” at live readings, but I lack the confidence to do so. Maybe some day. An extra Nien Nunb is certainly a step in the right direction!
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You merely lack a squadron of Nien Nunbs. The rest (sound/poetry) is perfect!
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I love the cawing crows in the background! A subtle touch of malevolence…
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Crows are fascinating creatures. They are welcome to caw in my background anytime. π
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And mine too!
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I hear a strong, steady and unmistakable rhythm throughout. Fine work!
Do you read yourself as part of the editing process? I’ve been doing that, recording and listening to catch mistake I made in scansion that I hadn’t seen on paper.
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Thank you. I read aloud as I write, which often helps decide line breaks, etc.
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