The Language of Birds
(for Lydia)
Something thrown beyond
light: a stone,
words. The language of birds
evades us but for the simplest
measure. And how can we comprehend
those who live with the
wind when our own
bodies seem far away? In the darkness
certain sounds come clearer, as if in
absence one finds strength, the evidence
gathered with every breath. Speech is,
of course, not the answer. We release
what we must, and in turn are released.
* * *
This first appeared on the blog in April 2015 – another oldie dug out of a folder. I wrote it for my niece perhaps twenty-eight years ago, and don’t believe it was ever published. It felt good to finally release it to the light and air.
Lovely. Sheโs blessed to have you. Great piece and thanks for sharing
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Thank you very much!
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A lovely piece!
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Thank you, Secretive One.
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beautiful
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Thanks , Beth.
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Beautiful poem. For me, the strongest ending is simply “We release what we must.”
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Thanks, Lola. I hope this finds you well. I prefer your ending! There’s much I would change in this piece if I were to rework it, but it’s a relic of younger days… ๐
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I look forward to reading more.
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Reading through the comments and your note of much you would now change, well, certainly, like water dripping on a stone, we are shaped and molded, weathered – but as a piece from long ago, there is still magic and mystery within these words – wise words. And I love the image and question: of trying to understand those who live in the wind when our bodies are grounded. The way you’ve phrased it is so moving, so layered and it leaves me breathless. Cheers!
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Thank you very much. These old pieces are fun to examine, but they often feel as if written by another person. And I suppose they were – much change occurs in a quarter century.
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LOL@a quarter century – but surely, if anything, you’ve aged well, like a most excellent bottle of wine (even if you prefer a cold brew)
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Ha! I admit to having aged… But I do enjoy a good glass of wine, too.
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well then cheers! whatever keeps the muse(s) content and well fed
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The muse is seldom underfed in this house! ๐
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food, to plate and serve the palate well … ๐
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I’m drawn in – thinking of words (spoken, written, prose, poem … text msg even) being thrown beyond light. Implies never seen (heard) – and yet, “out there” – perhaps on wings, flying around, choosing where to alight and BE seen (heard). Neat poem!
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Thanks, Jazz. Sometimes they find a place to land…
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really beautiful
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Thank you!
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There is an immense feeling of freedom!
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Birds do that!
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Fluff-course! ๐
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๐
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A splendid suffusion
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๐
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Of course it isn’t. Beautiful!
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Birds. More birds!
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