
Nocturne (Fall 1983)
Tall weeds block
the view. Remove
sound from sight,
the guitar becomes
kindling. I stretch
my hands toward
the burning wood,
hearing the echo
and the woman.

This first appeared here in November 2015.

Nocturne (Fall 1983)
Tall weeds block
the view. Remove
sound from sight,
the guitar becomes
kindling. I stretch
my hands toward
the burning wood,
hearing the echo
and the woman.

This first appeared here in November 2015.
Conjures remorse … taken either literally or metaphorically.
Dates make intriguing tags … what might have been kindling in my 1983 world? (Before I began writing, so no traces to reconnect!)
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I so seldom wrote about myself back then that the surviving poetry offers little clue. At least not directly. 🙂
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burning love…it does, sometimes (both positively and negatively) (K)
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Oh, yes. In many ways.
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So mysterious! And so very beautiful, Bob!
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Thank you, Lynne! Fingers crossed that my book arrives today!
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Yes! Mine too!
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Beautiful Robert! Love the stings becoming kindling!
dwight
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Thanks, Dwight!
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Poignant and powerfully reflective
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Thank you, Derrick.
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