Another untitled poem from the 80s…
wood and water
the wave of
fragrance so perfect
we seek to
obtain it as
if we could
be windows open
to a light
the gentlest cloud
would obscure still
spreading like one’s
final exhalation which
travels only to
disperse and become
at last another’s
This first appeared here in June 2017.
Nice mingling of smell, light carried via air (breath like wind, pushing it all in different directions).
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Thanks, Jazz. Smell is such an important sense, but often seems neglected in poetry.
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There is a Buddhist memory quality here… I can almost literally smell the sandalwood incense smell of the temples I meditated in back in the day in in/around Kansai. Thanks for reposting this one!
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Happy to repost, Daniel. Thank you!
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If I can just make another comment, this appealed to me because I am blind, and I could smell what you were describing. It is truly beautiful
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Thanks so very much. I’m pleased it resonated for you.
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I can smell it now, wafting in on the evening rain, the aroma of nature’s wet eucalyptus trees
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Mmmm. A gorgeous fragrance.
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Love this poem! Straightforward rather than simple, saying exactly what it means to say.
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Thanks very much, Joan.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, Leslie.
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Hi Robert, your page for this post is unstable on my site, flicking off and on all the time, not sure what the problem is….
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Someone else had that problem a while back. I can’t remember what the solution was, but will try to locate that post. I was never able to duplicate the problem on the five devices I used.
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It’s not happening on my phone, so might be a little problem with my little temporary computer. 😉
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Let’s hope it goes away. I know how annoying that can be.
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It seems to be gone ..yeah..
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