
Wind
That it shudders through
and presages an untimely end,
that it transforms the night’s
body and leaves us
breathless and wanting,
petals strewn about,
messenger and message in one,
corporeal hosts entwined,
that it moves, that it blends,
that it withdraws and returns without
remorse, without forethought, that it
increases, expands, subtracts,
renders, imposes and releases
in one quick breath, saying
I cannot feel but I touch,
I cannot feel
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“Wind” first appeared in Blue Hour Magazine and is included in my first chapbook, If Your Matter Could Reform.

I love it! “What feels…but cannot touch!” An interesting concept, Robert!
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It is a conundrum, Dwight!
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Very good!
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I cannot feel but I touch… I love those ending lines. Wow!
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I’m very pleased that the lines resonated. Thank you!
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Beautiful thought process
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Thanks very much! I’m odd, but mostly harmless. 😀
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The messenger and the message in one…hmm interesting.
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A conundrum!
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This a wonderful poem. If the wind could describe itself in words, these would be the words of the wind.
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Thank you!
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Pretty!
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Very poetic and metaphoric. Loved the rhythm of it. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you, Anand. Much appreciated.
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Beautiful poem!
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Thanks very much, Michael.
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Isn’t it so amazing and the Bible says “A man of the Spirit is like the wind” you can never tell where next its going.
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We never know! So true.
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Wonderful to now see this poem showcased on Discover, Bob! Yay!
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I had no idea it was, Cate. Thanks for letting me know!
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It’s Beautiful.
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Thank you, Ridhi!
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The wind has always made me think. I felt myself smile as I read this poem. Commendable.
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Thank you very much. The wind is always with me.
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Love it
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Thanks very much!
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i love it nice concept
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Thanks very much.
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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I liked it so much..There’re such a beautiful vibes at this poem
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I’m so pleased it resonated for you. Thank you.
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I liked it… There’re such a beautiful vibes at this poem
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Thank you. I’m so pleased it resonates for you.
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It’s my pleasure
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Really nice post
I would really appreciate if you guys could check out my blog, thanks
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Thank you.
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Beautiful poetry. Continue to strengthen your roots. It will be a blessing in your future
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Thanks very much. I always look to the earth. 🙂
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👏🏾👏🏾
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Thank you.
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Feel free to share my blog with your friends as well
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Would love it if you guess checked out my posts and left your opinions.
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I’ll be certain to visit your blog. Thank you.
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🙏🏽
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So glad I got to read your poem on WordPress.
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Thank you, Sean!
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You’re welcome. I shared the poem and your website to buy your collection. Hopefully that will help just a bit. I try to do what I can to promote work I enjoy. Have a good weekend.
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That is very generous of you. Thank you again!
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Love it!
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Very good
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Thanks very much.
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very natural, very beautifull
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Thank you!
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I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM ENORMOUSLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM A POET TOO –ON AMAZON HAVE AUTHOR PAGE DINAH DIETRICH AUTHOR OF PAPER CRANES
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Thanks very much, Dinah.
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the only word i can say is fantastic
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Thanks very much!
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This is beautiful
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Thanks very much.
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The poem has deep meaning. It is very great and keep up the good work.
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Wow. Very thought provoking. “If walls could talk” should be changed to “if the wind could write poetry.” Imagine all the things the wind witnessed before there were even any walls.
Keep up the good writing.
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Thank you! Just think: a world without walls…
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…now that’s an appealing thought.
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It is!
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Cool!!
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This poem reminds me how even the most transparent of things have substance, just oblivious to our eyes! I’m lying if I say this piece didn’t unlock one very important perspective of mine. Keep it up!
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Thank you for your kind words. I’m pleased this resonated with you.
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Such a great piece ❤️
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Thanks very much!
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Love the ending!
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you!
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Wow this is amazing and so beautiful
I wrote a poem too called petals in the wind
Could u please read it and tell me what u think? Im still a beginner at this
I would really appreciate your opinion
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Thank you.
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No problem
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Have you read much contemporary poetry? If not, you might read Jane Hirshfield, Ocean Vuong, Robert Hass, Danez Smith, Camille Dungy and I could go on and on… Getting to know their work (and that of others) intimately will help your writing immensely!
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Oohh thank you I’ll give them a try
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Appreciable
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Great poem
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Thank you!
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To have the insight into writing a poem comes from a personal perspective that not all men and women will every feel as deeply. You must be a sensitive person who has been given a beautiful gift. Different styles of everything especially the connection of the vocabulary that makes a rhythm and rhymes with smooth sounding like a wave that silently connects to the wave before it joining into the silent sea. A calming influence that the storm of its words and reactions to the readers vision simply become one the turmoil and the softness of the meaning is met in full. The struggles and the joys and sorrows join in a meaning different from each reader
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Language fascinates me, and the art and craft facets of poetry, keep me thinking. It’s a source of endless education.
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Very nice
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Thank you.
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this is beautiful
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You are very kind. Thank you.
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It’s amazing ! It’s like wind speaking it’s heart out …
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